Monday, March 13, 2006

The music's much too loud

Just spent loads of time editing my boyfriend's essay for entrance into AmeriCorps, and then Chris, Andrea's boyfriend, also spent loads of time editing using my edited version and the original version. Now that, my friends, is truly something. The essay, either way, is probably good to go. Chris and I had the same feeling about the essay, so our versions aren't all that different, except he was probably more brutal about word choice, and I felt like I was losing meaning when I changed the original words.

So we'll see what may come.

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